Exercise: Improve writings based on multiple criticism using Chain of Thought (COT)

Chain of thoughts (思維鏈): Step by step makes it easy. For novels as well as reports and thesis

Frame, story lines, Setting, characters

Generate Draft v1

Appreciate, criticize

Apply criticism 1, generate draft v2.1

Apply criticism 2, generate draft v2.2

Apply criticism 3, generate draft v2.3

Apply criticism 4, generate draft v2.4

Apply criticism 5, generate draft v2.5

...

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Apply appreciation 1, generate draft v3.1

Apply appreciation 1, generate draft v3.2

Apply appreciation 1, generate draft v3.3

Apply appreciation 1, generate draft v3.4

Apply appreciation 1, generate draft v3.5

*/

Let the Criticism be as follows

1. The story may benefit from more detailed descriptions of the characters' physical appearances and mannerisms to help readers better visualize them.
2. The dialogue could be more dynamic and varied to reflect the characters' individual personalities and backgrounds.
3. The novel could explore the challenges and conflicts the couple faces in their long-distance relationship to add more depth and realism to the story.
4. The story may benefit from additional subplots or supporting characters to enrich the narrative and provide more context for Reiko and Ogiri's relationship.
5. The ending feels somewhat abrupt and could be expanded to provide a more satisfying resolution to the couple's journey.
6. 
   

1. 故事可以從更詳細描述角色的外表和舉止中獲益,以幫助讀者更好地想像他們。

2. 對話可以更加生動多變,以反映角色各自的個性和背景。

3. 小說可以探索這對情侶在異地戀中面臨的挑戰和衝突,為故事增添更多深度和真實感。

4. 故事可以從添加更多子情節或配角中獲益,以豐富敘事內容,並為玲子和荻里的關係提供更多背景。

5. 結尾感覺有些突兀,可以擴展以提供更令人滿意的解決方案,完善這對情侶的旅程。​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​

Prompts

1. Load starry romance or use your own Class exercise: Capturing a black hole

2. 

If the criticism is not itemized, make it so.

3 According to criticism 1, improve the novel, then show me the improved novel​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​, mark what is new, by labeling in bold

4. According to criticism 2, further improve the novel, then show me the improved novel​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​, mark what is new, by labeling in bold

5. do the following steps, one at a time, 6. According to criticism 3, further improve the novel, then show me the improved novel​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​, mark what is new, by labeling in bold 7. According to criticism 4, further improve the novel, then show me the improved novel​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​, mark what is new, by labeling in bold 8. According to criticism 5, further improve the novel, then show me the improved novel​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​, mark what is new, by labeling in bold 9. According to criticism 6, further improve the novel, then show me the improved novel​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​, mark what is new, by labeling in bold 10.  According to criticism 7, further improve the novel, then show me the improved novel​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​, mark what is new, by labeling in bold

10. do the following steps, one at a time, with variable i running from 1 to N, N is the number of criticism: According to criticism i, further improve the novel, then show me the improved novel​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​, mark what is new, by labeling in bold

11. criticize the final improved novel

12. do the following steps, one at a time, with variable i running from 1 to N, N is the number of criticism: According to criticism i, further improve the novel, then show me the improved novel​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​, mark what is new, by labeling in bold

13. Generate the English version